2013 Post 10: Script Feedback

When we had completed our srcipt within our group we had checked over it to make sure there were no errors and we also had to check that the language used was appropriate for our target audience. After we had double checked our script it was ready to be shown to our target audience so we selected a few random people and showed them the script. By doing this they gave us feedback of what they thougth could be improved and what was needed to be done to make it complete. This feedback was very helpful as it gave us more idea's on what could be done to make our script suit our film more, the feedback was taken into consideration and as a group we looked over it to create more ideas.

The main feedback point was to make sure the characters part in the script were suitable for there ages and ability, for example the girls are very young so this means that they have to use words appropriate for there age. The feedback given was also helpful as Alan used words that the girls would not have understand, we simply changed these words as one of the target audiences that gave us feedback said that the words used were not appropriate.